Glancing
up at Lucas as he inched his way closer, him and Daniel both leaning in, attempting
to sneak a look at what was inside the safe. I looked back down at the fairly
sized, black velvet draw string bag as it sat there, holding whatever it was gramps
left to me for safe keeping. Grabbing the bag out from its home and clutching
it to my chest like a life line, I stood with an amused smile as I saw the
mirrored looks of confusion on both boys’ faces.
“We can
go now.” I said to them both, still holding onto my smile and the bag as I
walked past Daniel and Lucas, to lead the way back through the house.
“Wait,
that’s it?” I heard Lucas ask behind me as I kept walking.
Within
moments of stepping out into the hallway, my senses were bombarded by the heavy
scent of rotten eggs and decay. Mixing with the lingering smell of ash and
cinder in the air, I raised a hand to cover my mouth and nose at the unbearable
odor, so strong I felt I could almost taste it on my tongue. Walking
as the boys came to join me, we were almost through the hallway before I felt
the horrible stench clouding around me.
“And
what may I ask, are you kids doing here?” said a voice from behind us “Besides
trespassing on private property.”
Stopping
in our tracks we turned towards the voice and were greeted by the stern face of
a patrolling officer, standing in the shade less than a foot away. He was tall
and in full uniform from the hat that covered his crew cut, to the aviator
sunglasses that covered his eyes. He was decent looking, with a sharp angled
nose and wide set jaw, he would have even been hot if the lower buttons on his
shirt weren’t being pulled taunt by his developing potbelly.
Lowering
my hand from my face, I plastered on a warm smile before answering his
question.
“Well officer, it’s hardly trespassing if it’s
my house now isn’t it?” I said to him in a sugary tone as I felt both
boys subtly position themselves on either side of me.
“Your
house?” he asked, the corners of his mouth turning up “and what did you
say your name was again Ms. ?”
“October.
My granddad owns this house.” The words flew out my mouth before I felt Daniel’s
hand on my waist squeezing in protest, not to answer.
“Well
I’m sorry Ms. but the owner of this house died in the fire. He didn’t have any
relatives or known family.” He replied with amusement “either way, you and your friends
shouldn’t be here. Come on I’ll walk you out.” He said as he stepped out of the
shadow and into the light, towards us.
“It’s
ok Sir, we can find our own way out.” I heard Lucas say to the officer.
I felt
him grip my upper arm and pull, trying to lead me away from the officer so we
could leave but I couldn’t. For the second time, standing in my house I saw
something that shocked me frozen.
As the
officer stepped out of the shadows and into the evening light, I watched as it streamed across the right side of his face, altering him
completely. Where the parts of him I could still see in the shadows were the
same as when I first saw the officer, the parts of him that were in the light
were beyond human. Where he had pale brown skin and perfect white teeth
sandwiched between an average looking mouth on the left of his face, the light
exposed his skin as a dark shade of reddish brown, covering his right. No lips,
just two rows of sharp jagged teeth, tinted yellow.
“You alright Ms. ?” I heard the officer ask
me, his eyebrow furrowing in unease as my eyes stayed fixated on his face.
Reaching
his hand forward to pull down his shades, I stared as horror dawned over me
black and violent, the same as his eyes. Taking an involuntary step
back, I stumbled into the boys right beside me.
“October?
What’s wrong?” Lucas whispered to me in question.
“His
face. His Eyes.” Was all I could manage to say.
He must
have heard me, the officer, because within second the blackness that
encompassed his iris and the white in his eyes shifted from concern to realization
to fierce resolve.
“You
can see me!” he roared as he crouched down on all fours and lunged towards to
me like a panther.
It
all happened at once as Lucas, whose hand still gripped my arm, wretched me back
tossing me to Daniel. Reaching behind him, Lucas pulled out a hand gun and
fired two quick shots at the officer hitting him right between the eyes.
Slumping
to the floor, the officer laid face down in a life less heap at Lucas’ feet. Never
taking his eyes off the body, Lucas returned his gun to the small of his back as he
turned to where he threw his duffel to the ground. Opening it he drew out a
machete, long and thin, he tightly gripped the handle of the curved blade as he
walked over to the body.
Pulling
me back into him, Daniel snaked an arm around my shoulders as the other tried
to cover my eyes from the gruesome scene about to unfold.
“Don’t
look.” Daniel said to me as he struggled to turn me away.
Ripping
his hand off my eyes, I pushed away from him in time to see Lucas bring the whistling
vane down in one swift move, severing the head. Wiping the black blood off the
machete on the officer’s clothes, Lucas dropped it back in his duffel as he
pulled out lighter fluid and matches. Dousing the surely dead body in it, he
stepped back and struck a match.
I felt
like I was watching something burn in fast forward. Seconds was all it took for
the body to start to melt, even less for it to disintegrate until the fire
burnt out, leaving nothing behind but scorch marks on the already singed floor.
Ahhh what was in the bag???? lol This book is so exciting!
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ReplyDeleteI like this scene. I can almost smell the rotten egg from here!
Thanks for stopping by my blog...
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Wow, cool blog! I'm a new follower :-)
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wow, you're writing your own story! I am a new follower, and when I have some more time, I'll read from chapter one!
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